GUIDE
You're a stranger. This audit is your handshake. Done right, it shows you understand their business before you've said a word, and makes ignoring you feel like a missed opportunity.
Subject: Quick observation about [Their Company]'s checkout
Hi [Name], I was looking into e-commerce checkout flows in the [industry] space and came across [Company Name]. While browsing, I noticed something that might be affecting your conversion rates. Your payment form doesn't validate credit card inputs in real time, so users only discover errors after clicking Submit. On mobile especially, this creates friction and likely increases cart abandonment. I put together a quick 2-minute analysis showing this and two other issues in your checkout flow. No obligation at all, just thought you'd find it useful: [link] Happy to chat if you'd like to discuss any of this. Best, [Your Name]
You're a stranger. This audit is your handshake. Done right, it shows you understand their business before you've said a word, and makes ignoring you feel like a missed opportunity.
Subject: Quick observation about [Their Company]'s checkout
Hi [Name], I was looking into e-commerce checkout flows in the [industry] space and came across [Company Name]. While browsing, I noticed something that might be affecting your conversion rates. Your payment form doesn't validate credit card inputs in real time, so users only discover errors after clicking Submit. On mobile especially, this creates friction and likely increases cart abandonment. I put together a quick 2-minute analysis showing this and two other issues in your checkout flow. No obligation at all, just thought you'd find it useful: [link] Happy to chat if you'd like to discuss any of this. Best, [Your Name]